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| Cea | 3:07 AM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
 Group: Genius Posts: 837 Total: 1990 |
Does anyone have any comments or suggestions? I really want to improve my writing and hopefully one day write about Naruto and Sasuke.
_________________________________________ A good player knows how to play his class. An elitist knows how to play everyone else's class.
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| Sinsie | 3:10 AM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
 Group: Beauty Queen Posts: 256 Total: 682 |
I was left wanting more. In my opinion you could've put more description into what the characters looked like, what they were wearing, and how they interacted with each other. For twenty minutes straight.
Other than that pretty good looking forward to more works! _________________________________________  |
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| JeebsLuvsPie | 4:04 AM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
 Group: Jiritsu Spiritual Guide Posts: 282 Total: 786 |
In all seriousness, I seriously like it.
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| Cea | 5:12 AM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
Group: Genius Posts: 837 Total: 1990 |
JeebsLuvsPie wrote:
In all seriousness, I seriously like it. Are you seriously serious?! _________________________________________ A good player knows how to play his class. An elitist knows how to play everyone else's class.
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| Professor | 9:18 AM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
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reply to Cea:
Before I noticed whose birthday it was, I was about to edit every instance of Gakumerasara to Lord Blax. _________________________________________  |
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| Cea | 1:21 PM on November 13, 2012 | (+0/-0) | |
Group: Genius Posts: 837 Total: 1990 |
Professor wrote:
reply to Cea: Who cares whose birthday it was. It was a RP about Gakumerasara and I. Not about Blax and I. _________________________________________ A good player knows how to play his class. An elitist knows how to play everyone else's class.
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